Funy

I really like how you made everything move less than 1 mph and then repeat itself; it really made me grasp the importance of helping my community by volunteering at my local salvation army.

Not bad for a test i guess

Your drawing style isn't THAT bad (you could add a bit more detail), but the biggest flaw in the flash is that it moves like a slideshow and doesn't have any sound. I know it's just a test but in the future change the framerate to something like 24 frames per second and add some sound.

Fun

Everything was smooth and worked nicely. The only suggestion I can think of is improve the graphics

Pretty good start

The controls were fine and I liked the art style. The only problem was at times it was hard to distinguish what you could and couldn't jump on; I was stuck on the rocky level at first because I didn't know I had to jump. You also have to add music, a jump animation, and increase the framerate a bit to make it more interesting. Other than that, it was a pretty good game.